Friday, October 7, 2016

Help for High School/College Students (Handbook for Writers review)

Writing and assessing writing are sometimes difficult subjects for both instructors and students. I am always interested in resources to assist in both of these endeavors, and Excellence in Literature Handbook for Writers published by Everyday Education, LLC is one such tool.

I will quickly note that this review is for the digital version of this product, which has its own benefits and drawbacks when compared to a physical version. While I generally prefer a book in the hand (particularly a reference book), a nice advantage is the ability to search the ebook for a specific topic which can make it fairly easy to browse and locate the information that you need.

The Handbook for Writers is split into two sections. The first part details construction of arguments and essays, while the second covers the mechanics of writing. To give you a idea of the depth and breadth of the material covered here is the basic Table of Contents.

Part 1
  1. Introduction to Essays and Arguments
  2. Arguments: Some Simple first Principles
  3. Setting up the Argument: Definition
  4. Definition: Defining Key Terms
  5. Deduction and Induction
  6. Organizing the Main Body of an Argument (I)
  7. Organizing the Main Body of an Argument (II)
  8. Paragraph Structure
  9. Paragraph Functions
  10. Reading Arguments
  • Sample Outlines for Essays and Research Papers
  • Critical Approaches to Shakespeare: Some Initial Observations
  • Some Criteria for Making Literary Evaluations
Part 2: Introduction to Usage and Style
  1. Phrases, Clauses, Sentences
  2. Words
  3. Basic Punctuation
  4. Pronouns
  5. Parallelism or Parallel Structure
  6. Modifiers, Gerunds, Infinitives
  7. Clarity, Logic, and Structure
  8. References and Bibliographies
  9. Basic Format for Essays and Research Papers
  • Keyhole Essay Graphic
  • The Six Sections of an Approach Paper
  • 11 Things a Paragraph Can Do
  • Rubric for Writing Evaluation
In addition to "reference" material there are numerous examples and exercises to help the student see exactly what is being taught and the opportunity to try the work themselves. 
In the page below you can see a portion of one example on the importance of defining a thesis, the explanation of the example, and following the beginning of an exercise in recognizing potentially useful thesis statements. 














Here is a page from section 2 of Part 2 dealing with the use of words in writing. This particular section is talking about colloquialisms, names, and appropriate tone. There are definite "Do's" and "Don'ts" included for each portion. I find the "Word" section to be filled with information on avoiding the improper use of words, which is one of the most common mistakes made in writing today, in my opinion.


It is suggested on the Everyday Education, LLC website that instructors use this as a tool for correction. When there is a specific error in a piece of writing, rather than just marking it wrong (Which doesn't really help a student fix their errors), there is a good chance that the topic is covered in this handbook and you can note the pertinent section by number (see the 2.6 in the image above), and have your student visit (or revisit) the instruction on their own. This gives them the chance to see a correctly modeled sample and explanation before they rewrite their own work.

Not So Nutty Nitty Gritty 
In final analysis, I believe that this is going to be a very useful tool for both my high-schooler and my soon-to-be college student as they sharpen their writing skills.
I think it will also be a helpful reference tool for me, as I assess their writing.
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Thursday, October 6, 2016

"If You Were Me and Lived In...The Middle Ages, Renaissance Italy, Colonial America, The American West" (Review)



This review is brought to you by Carole P. Roman and Awaywegomedia.com.

My little history buff was quite excited when a package arrived last month with four historical books for his use and perusal:

If you remember my review of previous Carole P. Roman books, her geography series for a slightly younger age group, If You Were Me and Lived in...France, Mexico, South Korea, Norway. This latest series introduces time periods instead of specific cultures, and includes much more information than the geography/culture series. In fact, these historical time period books are recommended for a variety of ages (Depending on the book) from 1st through 9th grade. At the end of each of the books you will find a section of  "Famous People ..." from the time period with a paragraph to introduce them, as well as a glossary for unfamiliar words.

The first book we read was If You Were Me and Lived in...the Middle Ages. This was a perfect go-along for our Five In A Row Unit on The Duchess Bakes a Cake. Youngest read this independently, as part of his social studies/history lesson and came up with a number of interesting questions and comments. He was particularly struck by the difference in the clothing that was worn during that time including scratchy woolens).
The book also gave a very good, if gentle introduction to Feudal society, typical foods, housing, and the general way of life for nobility and peasants. The illustrations by Bulgarian children's illustrator Mateya Arkova are very similar to the cover illustration, with somewhat cartoonish pictures in bright pastel colors. I appreciate that Carole chose to use a European artist for a book whose history is largely based in Europe. This is the longest books of the four that I received for review at 97 pages.


We have not done anything formal just yet with Renaissance Italy, but with a Leonardo Da Vinci exhibit coming up at our local science museum at the end of the month, you can bet that this book will be on his reading list! :) It covers the same themes in a conversational manner~ what the towns were like, what people wore, what a wealthy merchant's home might be like, how those who weren't rich might live, what foods were eaten, etc...
In addition to the famous people and glossary at the end of the book, Carole touches on some of the reasons why the Renaissance was so important in art. Again, Carole chose a very appropriate comic illustrator, Silvia Brunetti from Rome to illustrate her book on Renaissance Italy. Most of the pictures are in comic form, but there are a couple with photos as background, with a drawn overlay, which is seen more in some of the other books.


The next book is another that we didn't delve into, but is perfect for reading near Thanksgiving, as it features a colonial family that arrived in America on the Mayflower, which is always a topic of discussion in November in our home.
Because we live in Massachusetts, it is always interesting to me to have books on hand that discuss the local (as well as national) history that is so prevalent in our state. While the cover of this book gives you an idea of the comic overlay on a photo, the rest of the book is strictly drawn, in a distinctive sharper comic style by Canadian illustrator Sarah Wright.


The final book (chronologically) that we were sent centers on the American West. This was of particular interest to me, and fairly timely as we had been on a cross-country road trip to my home state of Montana this summer. We visited the Museum of the Rockies in Bozeman, MT, home of the Tinsley homestead, which my great grandmother grew up in, and which my great-great grandfather built in the late 1800's.

Each of the books includes common names for the era, and I found it highly appropriate that the names Clarence and Lucy were included, as Lucy was was my Great Grandmother's name (Her mother was Lucinda), and there is at least one Clarence in my family history in Montana as well.
This was a great book to help my son imagine what life was like for his Great-Great-Great grandparents as they traveled west from Missouri and settled in Paradise, Montana. My only constructive criticism comes at the very end where the Famous People from the American West are mentioned, as Daniel Boone was included when he was more of a Kentucky/Missouri historical figure, vs a Western figure. I would have considered including a mountain man like Jim Bridger or Kit Carson instead (can you tell I'm invested in this geographical time period? ;) ).
The illustrator for this book, Paula Tabor from Texas appears to have merged photography with her comic overlays (Seamlessly in most cases), for a very interesting effect.

Not So Nutty Nitty Gritty 

Readable historical books for elementary to middle grade student which engage their interest through illustrations and details that are pertinent to them, as children, are a rare find and a great resource to have on hand. I think these fill that bill quite nicely.
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Monday, October 3, 2016

Tracie Peterson's 3rd Sapphire Brides title "A Love Transformed" (Review)

Being a "Born and Bred" 5th Generation Montanan myself, I always enjoy historical fiction when it is set in my home state. The most recent book that fits this bill is the third book in Tracie Peterson's Sapphire Brides series, A Love Transformed.



This story follows the life of a New York socialite (Clara Vesper) who is the unknown creative artist behind her husband's very successful family jewelry business. She has ties to Montana beyond the Montana Yogo Sapphires with which she fills her jewelry designs, as that is where she spent the happiest summers of her youth with her paternal aunt and uncle. It is also where she fell in love with one of their ranch-hands (Curtis), only to be separated by her mother's scheming ways, as she orchestrates Clara's marriage to Adolph Vesper.

At the beginning of the novel, Clara's husband is murdered, and she returns west with her two children to try to pick up the pieces of her life.

A simple novel would keep the story line to the reunion of Clara and Curtis, but Tracie engages her readers with more conflict and danger as America joins World War I.

I enjoyed reading this novel, and the growth of many of the characters, all of whom are flawed, The transforming messages of hope, forgiveness (of self as well as of others) and grace are sure to encourage those who appreciate a good clean novel in a historical setting. You might even be inspired to do a little research on your own regarding Yogo Sapphires, the Copper Kings (who receive a minor mention in the book), and some interesting aspects of World War I.

Blessings~



Friday, September 30, 2016

Nuggets of Gold Sept 30 (Music)

Well, it's been awhile since I've posted a nuggets of gold post, 
but I HAD to get one out this week~ 
some things that are too good to be missed!

Head on over to FreeCCM.com for a few GREAT songs! 
Unspoken and Hawk Nelson songs can be found on their free downloads page
MercyMe has their own special page ;) 
All you have to do is enter your email, 
and you can download these to your computer right away!  

And HearitFirst.com has a great song from All Sons and Daughters
I Surrender
Not sure how long everything is available for free download, 
so I suggest popping right on over if you're interested


Blessings~

Thursday, September 29, 2016

Another G. A. Henty hit! The Cat of Bubastes (Review)


My Middlest was delighted when a package from Heirloom Audio Productions (HAP) arrived at our door with their latest offering (and the first Henty book I had ever read ~ as well as one of the first e-books I had ever read), The Cat of Bubastes audio drama. He thoroughly enjoys listening to these Audio Dramas, with exceptional actors and actresses.
*I* was delighted, because this went along quite nicely with our start to World History, Ancient History being a subject we have only lightly covered in the past.

The story follows a prince (Amuba), who is sold into slavery when the Egyptians conquer his father's kingdom. Through the story we learn about Egyptian culture, customs and religion, a major aspect being that the Egyptians highly regarded cats, and killing a cat was punishable by death, even if it was an accident...


Heirloom Audio Productions always puts out an amazing product, with highly regarded actors and actresses, as seen above. The Extraordinary Adventures of G. A. Henty will rival any audio drama for professional and riveting production. See my reviews of other Heirloom Audio Productions: In Freedom's Cause,  With Lee in Virginia, The Dragon and the Raven, and Beric the Briton. As you will see, we have found them all to be first-rate.

Study Guide Printed and bound
Although my son did not use the Study Guide (which is geared more toward the middle school ages), I want to take a minute to mention a few things, because I really like the way this particular guide is set up.

  • I discovered a detail I missed in other HAP study guides (although it is there, I just didn't notice it right away): The section of the story for each chapter in the guide is clearly listed and includes the disc and time stamps for the portion of the story being reviewed. Very helpful when your child wants to go back and listen to catch details they may have missed. 

  • I also enjoyed reading the "Expand Your Learning" notes on many of the pages that gave background on some things that are not obvious, but add to your understanding of the culture in which the story takes place. 
  • While every chapter/lesson doesn't include an "Expand Your Learning" note, they do all follow the same format: 
    • Listening Well (Comprehension Questions)
    • Thinking Further (Deeper discussion/application questions)
    • Defining Words (Vocabulary). 
At the end of the study guide there are some extra pages, which are also useful and interesting.
  • More on Ancient Egypt book suggestions and resources
  • Bible Studies
    • Bible Study 1 "God Meant it for Good"
    • Bible Study 2 "The Knowledge of God"
    • Bible Study 3 "Idolatry and Tyranny" 

Here is a screen shot of the e-book from my computer screen. This works very nicely on the computer~ you can zoom in to make the text fairly large (For those who might require reading glass... ahem..). I did find that if I zoomed in, the pages refreshed in their entirety once I reached the end, but if I used "Zoom to fit" the text scrolled seamlessly, and the background remained static.
I personally found that reading the ebook on the computer screen worked better for me than the pdf on my iPhone, as there wasn't an easy way to enlarge the text and I had to scroll around the screen, just as an FYI.

A word about the Live the Adventures E-Newsletter (Available as a bonus with the 4pack purchase). It includes a Kids' Corner with hands-on activities and printables for all of the Henty stories that have been produced, Parent resources (inspiring and motivational blog posts), and more.

For a little taste of the quality as well as some behind-the-scenes action, you can watch the trailer here, or directly on their website.


Not So Nutty Nitty Gritty 
  • Company: Heirloom Audio Productions
  • Product: The Cat of Bubastes Audio Drama (2 hours)
  • Ages: Publisher recommended 6 - adult, My recommendation, 10 - adult
  • Price: 
    • $19.97 Download Version, Includes:
      • Study Guide (approximately 40 pages of actual 
      • Downloadable Poster
    • $29.97 Single Pack, Includes above and: 
      • Soundtrack MP3 download
    • $99.97 Four-Pack (Great for Gift-giving), Includes all of the above as well as:
      • The Cat of Bubastes ebook with colorful graphics and illustrations
      • Access to Behind-the-Scenes documentary  (18 minutes)
      • Access to Live the Adventures E-Newsletter
      • Printable Promotional Poster
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Friday, September 23, 2016

KidsEmail.org Annual Subscription (Review)




My Youngest was very pleased to receive his own email when we were given an Annual Subscription from  KidsEmail.org  as part of the Homeschool Review Crew. He delights in the ability to send emails to family, and I appreciate the ability to monitor his use.

KidsEmail.org has a number of settings that can be customized as each family desires. Here is a look at the basic control panel home for the parent. This control panel allows the parent to customize the amount of oversight for each email address separately.


The greatest advantage to this program for my family are the Safety settings:

  • Receive mail from contact list only (yes or no) *other messages sent to queue to be reviewed by parent
  • Send mail to contact list only (yes or no)
  • Allow child to edit contact list (yes or no)
  • Send parent copy of incoming mail (yes or no)
  • Send parent copy of outgoing mail (yes or no)
  • Allow images from incoming mail (yes or no)
  • Allow links in received emails (yes or no)
  • Allow attachments in received emails (yes or no) (can be further customized to attachment type)
  • Allow bad words in received emails (yes or no) *most common bad words filtered out
  • Add tagline to sent messages (yes or no) *makes sure recipient knows they are communicating with a minor (Older teens will appreciate having this turned OFF ;)) 
  • Send email sender a notification when email goes to queue (yes or no) * This setting lets an unapproved sender know that their email will be delayed until a parent approves it (or refused if not accepted)

Some of these settings are no brainers for any age (Filter bad words... umm.. who wouldn't?) and others depend upon the maturity level of each child, and the amount of trust placed in each child.

The one setting that the children have total control over is the appearance setting~ there are a number of backgrounds that can be chosen, with a number of options to satisfy the tastes of many ages.
  

Tested it with my older teens (because there is that option...) and my daughter, who uses her iPod almost exclusively was having problems with the site~ The emails window is so small that she had to zoom in to write anything. You can see how tiny it is in the screenshot to the right. Then, if she wanted to add an one of the smiley faces, she would have to zoom in even further to be able to click that button. After clicking, rather than returning her to that location in the email, the program would zoom her in to random parts of the screen, and she'd have to click around to find the text again ~ rather frustrating. Thinking that this may not be optimized for tiny mobile devices.

My Youngest didn't seem to have any problem using it on the iPad as far a reading and writing emails.

However, he did run into another problem when he tried to send a drawing to his Dad from the iPad. The drawing tool wouldn't allow him to make multiple strokes, so he wasn't able to actually DRAW much (ie... a smiley face or written words unless in cursive). He did figure out a little go-around, as you can see at the bottom of the screenshot to the right...  but it took three different attachments. We checked it out on the computer, and drawing on the trackpad worked fine, but I'd like to see this feature optimized for mobile devices, as that is what is used most often in our home, whether a tablet or an iPod, and I suspect in many other homes as well.


While I have never had any reason to distrust my older kids' communications, my youngest has very little discernment at this point, so the ability to give him the freedom to communicate (like his older siblings) and yet monitor what goes in and out is a really nice option. The world is rapidly changing around us as technology grows and becomes more commonplace, with access being granted/expected at younger and younger ages (particularly as families travel or live long distance from grandparents, etc), so I appreciate when companies step up to help make it safer for our youngesters to be able to communicate with friends and family.

Not So Nutty Nitty Gritty 
  • Company: KidsEmail.org 
  • Product: Annual Subscription
  • Ages: Literate through teen
  • Price: 
    • Free 30 day trial
    • $38.95 Annually for up to 6 accounts ($2.99/month)
    • $4.95 Monthly for up to 4 accounts
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